Shakespeare's sonnets follow the following rhythm -
'a-b-a-b c-d-c-d e-f-e-f g-g '
I excitedly applied this to the sonnet which i was reading and fell in love with, a minute ago...and bingo , there lied a beautiful creation!
So are you to my thoughts as food to life, (a)
Or as sweet-season'd showers are to the ground; (b)
And for the peace of you I hold such strife (a)
As 'twixt a miser and his wealth is found. (b)
Now proud as an enjoyer, and anon (c)
Doubting the filching age will steal his treasure; (d)
Now counting best to be with you alone, (c)
Then better'd that the world may see my pleasure: (d)
Sometime all full with feasting on your sight, (e)
And by and by clean starved for a look; (f)
Possessing or pursuing no delight (e)
Save what is had, or must from you be took. (f)
Thus do I pine and surfeit day by day, (g)
Or gluttoning on all, or all away.(g)
So much so that i adore his work, this is just the cherry on the cake! well, maybe one say i will try and write my poem this way ! ;)
Jokes Apart ,my favorite line is definitely :
"Possessing or pursuing no delight
Save what is had, or must from you be took."
What's yours !?
P.S :Before i forget to mention,below is the Paraphrase for Sonnet 75- my new love and absolutely romantic work of art !
As food is to the body so are you to my soul
P.S :Before i forget to mention,below is the Paraphrase for Sonnet 75- my new love and absolutely romantic work of art !
As food is to the body so are you to my soul
| Or as spring showers are to the ground; | |
| And for the contentment you bring me I allow such inner strife | |
| As the conflict between a miser and his money; | |
| Who takes joy in his wealth, but soon | |
| Fears that ruthless competitors will steal his treasure, | |
| Now thinking it best to have you alone, | |
| Then thinking that the world should see how happy I am; | |
| At one moment wholly satisfied by feasting on your sight | |
| And the next moment utterly starved for a look at you: | |
| Having or seeking no pleasure | |
| Except what you have given me or what I will demand. | |
| And so I starve or feed to excess depending on the day, | |
W.W | Either gorging on you, or not having you at all. |
No comments:
Post a Comment